So at first i like it because of look and composition, we can easy can find what you want to show us, very nice stylization, non symmetric but it is no dominating over the expresion of girl. In eys and face we can se some sadness and that she was missing something and if want to show that that good work.
But only one thing I don't like in this picture the hand on first plain. It to much blur, and at first look we dont know if it is a hand or something else. I know this is the DOF but hmm i try to experiment with maybe shaper hand.
The last thing is the cut elbow in the left, little wilder about 3 cm will be better in my opinion. But it is great picture.
Very inspiring vision! She looks so sad but, also has that look of love in her eyes. Has a very French feeling to this image. Though this type of image has been done numerous times, I like it for the fact that it IS different and gives a much different emotion. I love your technique of not killing all the beautiful colors. It has a very vintage feel to it and the important colors remain. It's hard to tell what this image portrays emotionally. Forlorn, in love, distressed are a few of the words I'd use to describe this emotion. All in all, this is a fabulous piece!